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Wrong translation modifier

Sorry for writing in English. I'm the author of most of the original article in en.wiki and es.wiki. I think that one phrase was translated in a wrong way: "en raison de l'interruption d'une stratification sociale et d'un processus de formation d'un état secondaire après la chute de l'Assyrie". The original phrase is: "due to the interruption of a social stratification and secondary State formation process after the fall of Assyria". I tried to mean that a process of both stratification and state formation was interrupted. As I understand it, the French version states that only the stratification was interrupted but the state formation process actually happened. My French is very poor, but I guess the French version should be rendered like this: "en raison de l'interruption d'un processus de stratification sociale et de formation d'un état secondaire après la chute de l'Assyrie". Kind regards --Alejandro 20 janvier 2011 à 05:45 (CET)

Done, but I think that this phrase is not really clear if the reader is not aware of the debates about the Median "Empire" and the process of "Secondary states" formation. Zunkir (d) 20 janvier 2011 à 09:35 (CET)Répondre
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